Ness
27th April 2008 - 01:23 PM
Hmm. Not bad on both.
The first sig is cool. I like the text since it's fitting. The background is a little bit messy though... Maybe delete some areas to have some uniformity? I suggest that you add c4d to create a flow above the stock/render. His action is begging you to add some kind of flow there.
Second sig is all right. I like the color and the background though. The render looks a bit unsaturated and washed out so perhaps duplicate it and add screen or multiply to it. The circle or bubble effects are cool but I prefer to see it more defined and out there instead of it look opaque.

Also, add some kind of stronger lighting or shading so the focus is on her. You can do that by using black/white gradient and then adding a layer adjustment (play with the blending).
Otherwise, not bad.