Rebirth
23rd March 2008 - 08:08 PM
Pretty nice Hyo.

Though try to lower your text's opacity so it isn't distracting to the focal, and try to use the burn tool to add more depth. Like to try to burn the smudging in the first one. The light coming from behind should be in front of the render, and should be on the opposite side of him and closer to the edge. That would be a sufficient lighting source imo.

Try to not be so busy on Hichigo's lower arm, as your focal, as I am assuming, is his face, no? so you should also try to add more FX closer to his face, and more over the render imo.

Keep up the good work. =)