ok special thanks to halibel for inspiration, helping me, and for herr awesome fight till death tut I finally learned a few things

ok I made this in about 30 min heres the specs

size: 375x130
renders and c4d's from: planetrenders.net

It's nit a bad idea, I just think all the greens clash imho.

well comparatively to my other stuff its pretty good

but thanks finally someone gives me some feedback

Um I think the C4d's sorta overwhelm the render. I do like the background the whole stock is too simple imo. Work with your focals.

BTW dont keep making sig gallery threads keep your work in just one thread.

I'll refrain from it but I was really proud of this and I wanted someone to see it

and well it was the first time I got a c4d to actually work

Seems a little bit heavy on the right hand side to me. That c4d is very bright and is starting to detract from the render. Maybe reducing the opacity of that layer slightly may help.