These are my two latest productions, i hope you like them as much as i do. I really feel like i'm improving and like the new style i'm using

already commented on your second one.. the first one is good.. i like the style and even the text but it feels like it's missing something.. the right side looks a bit empty imo..

I agree about the first one. It's good but seems empty on the right. Second one's great! I like the kind of "dead energy" effect you have there, which fits the render very well. Great work!

I like the second one as well. Maybe if you did some sort of color blast around the birds it wouldnt look so empty.

Second one is eh in my opinion. I like the use of the c4d but the background is just eh although it fits well with the 'deadness'

Good second one.

I also agree that the first one seems a bit empty on the right. The text is very good though.